Jul 09, 2009 at 04:14 PM
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Sponsorship + PR DeathMatch

Stand-up and take credit sponsorship professionals! Many a perfectly manicured press release has been mangled by your doings. Sure you've explained it away: "more deals, more revenue, more acknowledgements..." but when media relations and corporate sales really go to battle, who comes out alive?

From Sarah Talalay of the Sun Sentinel:

Here’s my favorite part of the press release [on the Marlins' new ballpark] – a sports business sentence like I’ve never seen - ENJOY:

“The Badia Spices Groundbreaking Ceremony, built by the Florida Carpenters Regional Council, is presented by South Florida Ford Dealers, Preferred Care Partners and Baker Concrete Construction.”

Here's the full release.